Dear Miss Evans,
I am writing to ask if you can give us some advice to revise the short play adapted from our English textbook.
It's a famous story about Lady Mengjiang in Qin Dynasty . Lady Mengjiang's husband was taken away and forced to build the Great Wall the night they got married, she waited year after year, but only got the news of his death at last.
Lady Mengjiang was so sad that she cried at the great wall, causing it to fall apart.
I'm afraid there are some grammer and pronunciation mistakes in the play, could you please kindly give us some guidance on them?
Are you free tomorrow? Shall we meet at six o'clock tomorrow afternoon?
Looking forward for your reply.